Jarvid's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pixel Racers]

Lol theses suck balls

Sprites with 32 bit color aren't that small. Every spriter knows how to do simple gradients like that. Bigger, more detail.

RamboFox responds:

Thanks for the fair review/sarcasm.

Well, lets see you do better.

And that was the whole point of these sprites - to be small.

[Time to pretend]

I wish I could be an artist like you

This kinda looks like a color study that went awry, but the end result is still pleasing.
The stippling is a little bit weird, but it adds some flare perhaps? Looks like through some kind of frosted glass.
The skull is a bit weird in some places particularily in the back and his teeth. His teeth are a bit long and jut outward, but it seems this was intended, as was the lack of a jaw ;D.
Great composition 10/10. You're the best at scouting.

LaserKarl responds:

Thank you! I appriciate you pointing those things out!

[helghast win!]

hey SWolf

and i call all of these bad lol you can barely see the picture either darken your lines of find a better way to upload your drawings but from the looks of it they are ok.

TheSilentWolf responds:

Well besides copying exactly what i said on some of your drawings, it looks like you just gave me a bad review because i gave you a bad review. So next time just judge my drawing, don't try and get pay back because your mad that i gave you bad feedback.

[Contra high res]

Push it to the limit

Walk along the razor's edge
But don't look down, just keep your head
And you'll be finished

I like how you reproportained him , to make him look more human

[Mewtwo]

So beutiful

plz tell me how to drawl

[Soda Popinski]

I like it but

You didn't seem to take as many liberties with this image, its basically just The sprite prettied up a bit.

[potrait]

Looks like a trace

Not anywhere close to a finished composition

JaoArroz responds:

it is...... =/

[HAX 4 U]

This really sucks

Why do you even try?
This isn't even an optimal use of that shitty ms paint. The color choice is terrible, and it clashes all over.
"Oh I wanna use piss yellow as my background to 'compliment' his neon teal shirt. Ooh look at my use of negative space off to the right symbolising whats to come!"
What were you thinking when you made this?
Your core skils are internally flawed, every choice you made in the creation of this composition was a BAD choice. The first bad choice was the conception, a hoodrat Latino boy with floppy arms gritting his teeth bearing the words "HAX 4 u" It just sounds stupid. You can barely draw a simple curved line, your people are egg heads, and don't use the mantra "Oh I was using a mouse, so..." that doesn't work. You chose MS paint as your medium and you suffered with it. The final bad decision was using those god-awful colors. This picture is the kind of ugly that makes your eyes bleed, had no effort put into it, and makes you angry that someone would have created it.

[Rawr!]

The shading on its tongue... bleh

Otherwise, its another great piece

bloominglove responds:

Okay! I'll try to make the next one smaller! XD

[Goldfish]

I like everything but...

The resolution. I can't properly enjoy it zoomed in that far

I'm also cannot be sure that is a goldfish

bloominglove responds:

Yah... I forgot was this type of fish it was called... ^^; So sorry...